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  1. Posted: September 20, 2013In: Public

    A toptier bussnies man loses everything in court to his selfish wife, and must accept the father role and provide for his daughter /hugo

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    Added an answer on September 20, 2013 at 6:28 pm

    A toptier bussnies man loses everything in court to his selfish wife, and must accept the father role and provide for his daughter or else he will lose custody /hugo

    A toptier bussnies man loses everything in court to his selfish wife, and must accept the father role and provide for his daughter or else he will lose custody /hugo

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  2. Posted: September 17, 2013In: Public

    On the verge of striking it rich an intergalactic diamond huntress is summoned to earth for compulsory breeding, but she is kidnapped by a ruthless space pirate en-route and must fight for her freedom to make it home before she is sentenced to death.

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    Added an answer on September 20, 2013 at 8:55 am

    In order to make her goal clearer - what exactly is 'home'? Where, if she was kidnapped simply 'en-route' to Earth, will she be safe from the kidnappers? Sounds like an exciting story otherwise, good work!

    In order to make her goal clearer – what exactly is ‘home’? Where, if she was kidnapped simply ‘en-route’ to Earth, will she be safe from the kidnappers? Sounds like an exciting story otherwise, good work!

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  3. Posted: September 20, 2013In: Public

    A toptier bussnies man loses everything in court to his selfish wife, and must accept the father role and provide for his daughter /hugo

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    Added an answer on September 20, 2013 at 8:24 am

    One thing that might need clarifying is, what are the stakes? What happens if he fails as a father/providing for his daughter? Will he lose her to the wife?

    One thing that might need clarifying is, what are the stakes? What happens if he fails as a father/providing for his daughter? Will he lose her to the wife?

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