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A brilliant Russian Cadet shortly after his graduation day is being targeted by the CIA, his respond was a personal travel to NYC to change all well-known war tactics with the help of his genius weapons.
You might have a good story going, I don't know, cause even with the explanation in your comment, I still find it a bit confusing. I don't wanna repeat the other comments, but I do suggest that shorten it down a bit, to about half (It's now 57 words). I think the length of it adds to the confusion,Read more
You might have a good story going, I don’t know, cause even with the explanation in your comment, I still find it a bit confusing. I don’t wanna repeat the other comments, but I do suggest that shorten it down a bit, to about half (It’s now 57 words). I think the length of it adds to the confusion, try to keep it simple. Good luck with the story!
See lessWhen Ed tries to commit suicide a mysterious stranger shows up and offers him a deal he cannot refuse and when Ed break the deal he has to battle not just himself but other more dark forces as well. /Amanda
Maybe it's just me, but I find it a bit unclear exactly what Ed's goal is and what the stakes are, considering he started on the verge of suicide (how much worse could it get?). I assume the story will reveal all that, but I would like a bit more clarity in the logline. Maybe shorten it down a few wRead more
Maybe it’s just me, but I find it a bit unclear exactly what Ed’s goal is and what the stakes are, considering he started on the verge of suicide (how much worse could it get?). I assume the story will reveal all that, but I would like a bit more clarity in the logline. Maybe shorten it down a few words as well? /Kalle
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Not at all what I was thinking actually, but now when you've said it, I see that the logline suggests a similar movie. /Kalle
Not at all what I was thinking actually, but now when you’ve said it, I see that the logline suggests a similar movie. /Kalle
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