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  1. Posted: September 20, 2013In: Public

    When the president fails to take his daughter camping during his reelection campaign, she must outsmart his security staff and kidnap him, or risk losing him to the job for another four years. //Anya

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    Added an answer on September 20, 2013 at 8:22 am

    A fantastic idea, you describe what she must do; Both journey wise and in the situation and i can clearly see the moive 5/5 in my opinion but it is quiet big. Might wanna try and shorten it with something along; When the president does'nt bring his daughter during his reelection, she must outsmart hRead more

    A fantastic idea, you describe what she must do; Both journey wise and in the situation and i can clearly see the moive 5/5 in my opinion but it is quiet big. Might wanna try and shorten it with something along; When the president does’nt bring his daughter during his reelection, she must outsmart his security and kidnap him, or risk losing her father for another period~ or something like that! Otherwise very good! /Hugo

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  2. Posted: September 20, 2013In: Public

    When a warphotographer is questioned regarding the fate of a girlsoldier in her prizewinning photo, she must find out what happened to the girl, or risk losing both her professional reputation and her mind. //Anya

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    Added an answer on September 20, 2013 at 8:01 am

    I like that you describe what she must do or "else". You make it pretty clear what will happen and i can somewhat see the whole story which is super! Might want to add what she must do, spirtually or as we call it "the journey" to reach her goals! Overall it is a 4/5- would see on cinema! /hugo

    I like that you describe what she must do or “else”. You make it pretty clear what will happen and i can somewhat see the whole story which is super! Might want to add what she must do, spirtually or as we call it “the journey” to reach her goals! Overall it is a 4/5- would see on cinema! /hugo

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  3. Posted: September 20, 2013In: Public

    When a young lawyer dies and is sent to hell, he is determined to break his way into heaven, or he will suffer for eternity./Kalle

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    Added an answer on September 20, 2013 at 7:51 am

    A new and revised logline (possibly a few words too long): When a lawyer and his wife die in a car crash and she is sent to heaven while he is doomed to spend eternity in hell, he is determined to do whatever it takes to get out of there and reunite with his wife. /Kalle

    A new and revised logline (possibly a few words too long):

    When a lawyer and his wife die in a car crash and she is sent to heaven while he is doomed to spend eternity in hell, he is determined to do whatever it takes to get out of there and reunite with his wife.

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