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  1. Posted: June 22, 2020In: Romance

    After a health scare, a middle-aged widower decides to get back in the dating game for the first time in twenty years – but soon finds romance blossoming with his friend’s daughter.

    thedarkhorse Samurai
    Added an answer on June 22, 2020 at 9:23 pm

    Shorter version: After a health scare, a middle-aged widower decides it's time to find love again - but soon finds romance blossoming with his friend's daughter.

    Shorter version: After a health scare, a middle-aged widower decides it’s time to find love again – but soon finds romance blossoming with his friend’s daughter.

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  2. Posted: June 7, 2020In: Romance

    When a geek loner forms an unlikely friendship with the bad boy new kid, they set out to help each other get their dream date for prom – the two most popular girls in school.

    thedarkhorse Samurai
    Added an answer on June 8, 2020 at 9:20 am

    To add to this... The bad boy new kid would teach the geek to stand up for himself/confidence/to get the waters moving. The geek would help the bad boy/broken bird/damaged goods to open up. I mean - I suppose they both help each other get the waters moving. Who thinks it would be best if they were aRead more

    To add to this…

    The bad boy new kid would teach the geek to stand up for himself/confidence/to get the waters moving.

    The geek would help the bad boy/broken bird/damaged goods to open up.

    I mean – I suppose they both help each other get the waters moving.

    Who thinks it would be best if they were after the same girl? – and that becomes the MP twist/hook of the logline? Curious.

     

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  3. Posted: June 7, 2020In: Romance

    When a geek loner forms an unlikely friendship with the bad boy new kid, they set out to help each other get their dream date for prom – the two most popular girls in school.

    thedarkhorse Samurai
    Added an answer on June 8, 2020 at 9:13 am

    Hi Savinh0, I watched the following this weekend: MY BODYGUARD. CAN’T BUY ME LOVE. (underrated - don’t care what anyone thinks.) HIDING OUT. THREE O’ CLOCK HIGH. (Kinda like if Scorsese did a teen movie.) PRIVATE SCHOOL. (charming in the most 80s way.) SOME KIND OF WONDERFUL. LUCAS. PRETTY IN PINK.Read more

    Hi Savinh0,

    I watched the following this weekend:

    MY BODYGUARD.

    CAN’T BUY ME LOVE. (underrated – don’t care what anyone thinks.)

    HIDING OUT.

    THREE O’ CLOCK HIGH. (Kinda like if Scorsese did a teen movie.)

    PRIVATE SCHOOL. (charming in the most 80s way.)

    SOME KIND OF WONDERFUL.

    LUCAS.

    PRETTY IN PINK.

    Ended up with this logline.

    I considered the love triangle thing. But not sure. It is a clear hook/twist.

    The love triangle thing is certainly a trope to do a homage of/celebrate/kinda mock. It occurs in SOME KIND OF WONDERFUL, LUCAS, PRETTY IN PINK, etc.

    Admittedly – I don’t want my geek loner to be friend-zoned or to be this selfless saint. Or… perhaps he gets the girl and the bad boy criminal new boy turns out to be the saint. 

    I dunno. Be interesting if they both fell for an amalgam of KERRI GREEN in LUCAS and AMANDA PETERSON in CAN’T BUY ME LOVE.

    Lastly – be great to set this in the 80s. (Won’t mention that in the logline.)

    Thanks for the feedback.

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