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A mob enforcer who lives by the strict code that failure equals death, meets his match when ?3 million of mob funds is stolen by a desperate young man determined to make a difference with his life by ensuring the dirty money serves a charitable cause.
This was a lot to digest. The bulk of it not necessary to a logline. (Necessary to you but not to the logline.) When mob funds are stolen by a man who then gives them to a charitable cause, a mob enforcer must? or else/before? Filling these in will help you. INTENTION: ? OBSTACLE: ? Good luck!
This was a lot to digest. The bulk of it not necessary to a logline. (Necessary to you but not to the logline.)
When mob funds are stolen by a man who then gives them to a charitable cause, a mob enforcer must? or else/before?
Filling these in will help you.
INTENTION: ?
OBSTACLE: ?
Good luck!
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INTENTION: get revenge against bullies.OBSTACLE: ???Who is the protagonist? One of the bullies?
INTENTION: get revenge against bullies.
OBSTACLE: ???
Who is the protagonist? One of the bullies?
See lessA teenage loner meets his first love during lucid dreams and will have to choose between dream and reality, to be awaken without her or to never wake up.
Okay...A teenager meets the love of his life in his dreams - and must figure out a way to be with her, before/or else...I think you need to lean into the specifics of what's going on.I know you don't want to reveal too much in the logline - but you do need to get specific if you want it to pop/conjuRead more
Okay…
A teenager meets the love of his life in his dreams – and must figure out a way to be with her, before/or else…
I think you need to lean into the specifics of what’s going on.
I know you don’t want to reveal too much in the logline – but you do need to get specific if you want it to pop/conjure up the correct images in the reader’s head/be as strong and potent as possible.
Again – I do really love the concept.
Good luck with everything!
Keep working on it. The answer is always there. It’s just hiding 😉
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