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After his wife is killed by a rival street gang, a reformed criminal follows his dreams to teach music. But when a school shooting forces lockdown, he must protect a disabled protege.
I'm thinking the he must protect the protege because "After his wife is killed by a rival street gang." Otherwise, I don't see a reason to tell us about the wife (actually, telling us about the wife still might be too much back-story for a logline).
I’m thinking the he must protect the protege because “After his wife is killed by a rival street gang.” Otherwise, I don’t see a reason to tell us about the wife (actually, telling us about the wife still might be too much back-story for a logline).
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I like it so far, but it feels like a situation. What you wrote, feels like it's just the first scene in your story. You know, an agent is briefed (with the exact words you wrote). What I am missing from the logline is the second part -- the specific mission, such as, infiltrate and assassinate theRead more
I like it so far, but it feels like a situation.
What you wrote, feels like it’s just the first scene in your story. You know, an agent is briefed (with the exact words you wrote). What I am missing from the logline is the second part — the specific mission, such as, infiltrate and assassinate the most powerful man.
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