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  1. Posted: February 22, 2013In: Public

    When a pernickety hitman assassinates the wrong target he is wounded and has only two hours to eliminate his betrayer before the Mob kills him.

    timmyelliot
    Added an answer on February 22, 2013 at 10:35 am

    The clause, "he is wounded," seems like it just fell in there?

    The clause, “he is wounded,” seems like it just fell in there?

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  2. Posted: February 19, 2013In: Public

    In order to seduce his junior assistant, a conceited inventor exchanges bodies with an attractive stranger. But when she rejects his advances and he loses control of his research, he must attempt to reverse the exchange or else face the rest of his life living someone else's.

    timmyelliot
    Added an answer on February 21, 2013 at 3:08 pm

    correction: I meant to say the "majority of produced film's loglines " -- when I read through the loglines of produced films, I don't see that formula very often.

    correction: I meant to say the “majority of produced film’s loglines ”

    — when I read through the loglines of produced films, I don’t see that formula very often.

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  3. Posted: February 19, 2013In: Public

    In order to seduce his junior assistant, a conceited inventor exchanges bodies with an attractive stranger. But when she rejects his advances and he loses control of his research, he must attempt to reverse the exchange or else face the rest of his life living someone else's.

    timmyelliot
    Added an answer on February 21, 2013 at 3:01 pm

    The formula works, which is probably why it's popular here. I don't know. Maybe it's because we've gotten so used to reading each other's loglines, we've all sort of gotten into that same formula. The stories you've been coming up with are very unique. I think the packaging should be unique as well.Read more

    The formula works, which is probably why it’s popular here. I don’t know. Maybe it’s because we’ve gotten so used to reading each other’s loglines, we’ve all sort of gotten into that same formula.

    The stories you’ve been coming up with are very unique. I think the packaging should be unique as well.

    I mean, a majority of produced films could be broken into that formula, but, in reality, they probably aren’t.

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