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After suffering a mental breakdown a depressed businessman attempts to rebuild his life with his estranged wife, but when he meets a carefree barista he begins to question what it takes to truly be happy.
I really want to like it, but it feels... well... cliche. You know, "Manic Pixie Dream Girl teaches Broodingly Soulful Man to embrace life." Their professions seem to play into that cliche as well. Maybe you can switch their roles? It's the businessman who teaches happiness to a barista who feels liRead more
I really want to like it, but it feels… well… cliche. You know, “Manic Pixie Dream Girl teaches Broodingly Soulful Man to embrace life.” Their professions seem to play into that cliche as well. Maybe you can switch their roles? It’s the businessman who teaches happiness to a barista who feels like a cog in the machine? I don’t know.
See lessA gypsy has drugs to pick up in Chicago, while a lesbian ballerina thinks they?re sharing gas across the county to see family, but when she finds out the truth she picks up a rock and throws it at his face. With no money to get them home, and an appointment to keep with a drug dealer the couple decides to finish the job.
"but when she finds out the truth she picks up a rock and throws it at his face." this part feels more like it should be in a scene... even a line in a script itself. I can't see this belonging in the logline.
“but when she finds out the truth she picks up a rock and throws it at his face.” this part feels more like it should be in a scene… even a line in a script itself. I can’t see this belonging in the logline.
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I'm not sure about the title. I like the idea of an alliteration, but, at least for me, it almost boarders on the comical, as a near tongue-twister.
I’m not sure about the title. I like the idea of an alliteration, but, at least for me, it almost boarders on the comical, as a near tongue-twister.
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