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After being accused of murder, a na?ve secret agent searches for answers, only to find herself completely unequipped for life outside her sheltered little world.
It seems vague. It doesn't feel like you're telling me the story, but describing the conventions of the genre. You know, a thriller is about a naive "everyday person" who gets thrown into a very dangerous world.
It seems vague. It doesn’t feel like you’re telling me the story, but describing the conventions of the genre. You know, a thriller is about a naive “everyday person” who gets thrown into a very dangerous world.
See lessTo overcome her performance anxiety, a renowned classical pianist pursues an anonymous affair with a man who is sharply skilled at erotic knife-play.
I love it. Her performance anxiety is fear-based, so she engages in a form of fear play. For me, it's unique and interesting. It almost reminds me of "Girl on The Bridge," but, if I recall, knife-play in that film was about overcoming suicide and embracing life.... or whatever... I've been wanting tRead more
I love it.
Her performance anxiety is fear-based, so she engages in a form of fear play. For me, it’s unique and interesting.
It almost reminds me of “Girl on The Bridge,” but, if I recall, knife-play in that film was about overcoming suicide and embracing life…. or whatever… I’ve been wanting to watch that film again.
It’s one of my favorite loglines I’ve read on this site.
See lessAfter critiquing a bunch of other people's loglines, an optimistic screenwriter must improve his own poorly written ideas or wallow in unemployment forever. But what seems like a simple task soon reveals itself to be much harder than first anticipated …
I hope your optimistic screenwriter eventually wins. Good luck!
I hope your optimistic screenwriter eventually wins. Good luck!
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