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A successful attorney returns to his home town for his mother?s funeral only to discover that his Alzheimer?s-stricken father is suspected of murder and must represent him in court. The ordeal becomes an emotional journey that makes him a better man.
I like the story. Actually, I found myself repeating much of SydneyPaul. I think he nailed it with his comments... "only to discover" feels overused. The last sentence is unnecessary. A character arc is expected. Telling us he's "successful" isn't needed. It's pretty much assumed.
I like the story.
Actually, I found myself repeating much of SydneyPaul. I think he nailed it with his comments…
“only to discover” feels overused.
The last sentence is unnecessary. A character arc is expected.
Telling us he’s “successful” isn’t needed. It’s pretty much assumed.
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I love it, great title.
I love it, great title.
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I like it. In a good way, it reminds me of the 90s fad, when every premise seemed like it started with "...Die Hard n a [blank]..." I think mentioning the particular civil war (Irish) would help. Int his case, the era affects the mechanics, and the mechanics affects character choices. I also think yRead more
I like it.
In a good way, it reminds me of the 90s fad, when every premise seemed like it started with “…Die Hard n a [blank]…”
I think mentioning the particular civil war (Irish) would help. Int his case, the era affects the mechanics, and the mechanics affects character choices. I also think you can tighten the language. There seems to be a few phrases than can be switched for single words.
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