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The true life misadventures of a couple who try to save their failing marriage and reignite their dull sex life and relationship by daringly moonlighting as an ?escort duo? and experiencing the fantasies of others.
I think you're going in the wrong direction; the edit gives us way too much -- a 13 episode series would struggle to fit all this in. I think you have to choose what this movie is mainly about; is it about them keeping their marriage together, or, more about them becoming successful sex coaches/ theRead more
I think you’re going in the wrong direction; the edit gives us way too much — a 13 episode series would struggle to fit all this in. I think you have to choose what this movie is mainly about; is it about them keeping their marriage together, or, more about them becoming successful sex coaches/ therapists? Once you have chosen this, you then have to decide what the main stumbling block is to them achieving the goal.
Below are just a couple of my ideas:
‘A bored married couple discover a new lease on their love life by becoming professional sex coaches, but face a public witch-hunt lead by a conservative church leader hell-bent on their demise.
After opening up to each other about their inner most sexual fantasies a married couple struggle against their own jealousy and insecurities on the road to becoming professional sex coaches.
Obviously just MY take on a couple of potential ways you could go, and it could go A LOT of different ways — the point is to state only one goal and one clearly stated antagonist to them achieving that goal…
Again, best of luck with it.
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Hi TabooCouple, It's interesting subject matter, but I'd avoid stating 'dramatic and often hilarious' -- the specifics of the premise need to be dramatic and hilarious without you having to tell us that they are. It's an oversell that can look insecure/ amateur... just IMO. I'm reminded of Masters oRead more
Hi TabooCouple,
It’s interesting subject matter, but I’d avoid stating ‘dramatic and often hilarious’ — the specifics of the premise need to be dramatic and hilarious without you having to tell us that they are. It’s an oversell that can look insecure/ amateur… just IMO.
I’m reminded of Masters of Sex, where the subject matter really cooked because it was set in the 50’s and 60’s when sex in society was still taboo. You have an interesting angle with the ‘Pornification’ of culture and society with yours, which could be worked into the logline/ story.
Has potential, but I’m not yet getting grabbed by the youknowwhats — the logline just needs to focus on the dramatic goal and specifically what is stopping the couple from attaining it.
Best of luck.
See lessWhen her agent drops her, a shy ?love story? author attends a horror movie workshop where screenwriters are kept prisoner by a perverse guru who makes them die like their characters, so that only the best writer will survive.
'...then the guru kills the writer that stars in the best scripted scene...' So the scenes have to be performed by all the writers -- certainly they've heard of improv? As in, isn't in an actors hands whether or not a scene is good or not? And what would constitute a 'good' scene? It's got plausibilRead more
‘…then the guru kills the writer that stars in the best scripted scene…’
So the scenes have to be performed by all the writers — certainly they’ve heard of improv? As in, isn’t in an actors hands whether or not a scene is good or not? And what would constitute a ‘good’ scene?
It’s got plausibility issues, but if it branched into whacky comedy cum horror it could be gold.
Best of luck.
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