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  1. Posted: October 25, 2013In: Public

    After infected by a werewolf, a tormented Farmer frantically searches for a cure while stalked by ruthless hunters hired by the Mayor

    Tony Edward Samurai
    Added an answer on October 25, 2013 at 9:31 am

    Hi B8C, Love it. Could be T.V -- but has feature potential imo. Even though I think you get away with two sentences, you could have a play at getting it down to one -- but I had a play with that myself, and there is something about using two sentences here that works: It's not clear who '...the MonsRead more

    Hi B8C,

    Love it. Could be T.V — but has feature potential imo. Even though I think you get away with two sentences, you could have a play at getting it down to one — but I had a play with that myself, and there is something about using two sentences here that works: It’s not clear who ‘…the Monster plaguing the town.’ is — but if this was the case with show — as in, there’s a full moon… we see him change… we know another werewolf is out there… see some carnage… but are kept guessing as to who is actually to blame, well I think that kind of works.

    Anyway — best of luck with it, certainly pitch-able…

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  2. Posted: October 15, 2013In: Public

    'Inspired by true events; When an underprivileged Pakistani boy is murdered by his richer and more influential counterpart, A rookie lawyer (his best friend) sets on a journey to seek justice against a boy seemingly above the law. As his efforts continue to fail, he must ask himself; is it justice he seeks or revenge?'

    Tony Edward Samurai
    Added an answer on October 16, 2013 at 9:04 am

    ...or more plainly, if there is subtext in the logline, there will most likely be subtext in the script ...showing this ability, I would think, increases the trust a potential buyer of your film has in you, and the more trust they have in you the more likely they'd be to want to read your script.

    …or more plainly, if there is subtext in the logline, there will most likely be subtext in the script …showing this ability, I would think, increases the trust a potential buyer of your film has in you, and the more trust they have in you the more likely they’d be to want to read your script.

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  3. Posted: October 15, 2013In: Public

    'Inspired by true events; When an underprivileged Pakistani boy is murdered by his richer and more influential counterpart, A rookie lawyer (his best friend) sets on a journey to seek justice against a boy seemingly above the law. As his efforts continue to fail, he must ask himself; is it justice he seeks or revenge?'

    Tony Edward Samurai
    Added an answer on October 16, 2013 at 8:53 am

    Just wanted to second dpg up there -- the moral question, IMO anyway, is always best left as an implication through the stated ACTION of the logline... Not by openly positing the question itself. Those in a position to green light your project determine your abilities as a writer based upon your abiRead more

    Just wanted to second dpg up there — the moral question, IMO anyway, is always best left as an implication through the stated ACTION of the logline… Not by openly positing the question itself. Those in a position to green light your project determine your abilities as a writer based upon your ability to achieve this in the logline… It shows that the script has potential to be tight, yet deep, and not too ‘on the nose’…

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