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  1. Posted: September 12, 2013In: Public

    An unimaginative accountant who hates musicals is transported to an alternate universe where everybody sing and dance. He struggles to return to his own universe before he succumbs to the compulsion of joining in.

    Tony Edward Samurai
    Added an answer on September 13, 2013 at 9:41 pm

    Just an interesting note (for a potentially interesting movie...): in an early draft of Groundhog Day the scenario Bill Murray finds himself in is caused by a jilted lover performing a weird voodoo like spell on him (involving a hat, a tarot card, and a watch stuck at 5:59am...all which subsequentlyRead more

    Just an interesting note (for a potentially interesting movie…): in an early draft of Groundhog Day the scenario Bill Murray finds himself in is caused by a jilted lover performing a weird voodoo like spell on him (involving a hat, a tarot card, and a watch stuck at 5:59am…all which subsequently cath on fire…)… Obviously this was eventually removed — to what we have today, an amazing magical movie, with no logical explanation as to HOW it occurs. There IS the massive snow storm…hmmm.. Interesting…. When Dorothy travels to Oz she gets there buy way of a tornado…. Hmmm… Anyway…

    Also, ‘alternative universe’ would be a lot harder to write than setting it in THIS universe (for me, not necessarily for you…) where, by happenstance (say, after he’s nipped out on his date, who’s perhaps, a hard headed yet optimistic lass…) finds himself in the middle of a big storm on broadway… And when it’s over, the only way any New Yorkers can communicate is through song and dance…all but our stuck up/ narrow minded protagonist. I guess this would be like an alternative universe… It just conjures up strange imagery… I don’t know.

    Regardless, I really like it — best if luck.

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  2. Posted: September 10, 2013In: Public

    To get the girl of his dreams a timid momma?s boy must team up with the local cat burglar, but her unorthodox methods put more than his love life at risk.

    Tony Edward Samurai
    Added an answer on September 13, 2013 at 12:30 pm

    sorry -- just needed to clarify something I might of muddled up -- at the moment HE holds the cards (he has busted her and HE must keep silent for HER) as opposed to the cat burglar holding the cards -- and in turn forcing him to ACT.. anyway -- I'm sure you see what I mean ;)

    sorry — just needed to clarify something I might of muddled up — at the moment HE holds the cards (he has busted her and HE must keep silent for HER) as opposed to the cat burglar holding the cards — and in turn forcing him to ACT.. anyway — I’m sure you see what I mean 😉

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  3. Posted: September 10, 2013In: Public

    To get the girl of his dreams a timid momma?s boy must team up with the local cat burglar, but her unorthodox methods put more than his love life at risk.

    Tony Edward Samurai
    Added an answer on September 13, 2013 at 11:34 am

    fwiw (this is a tad long...): 'After getting caught cheating on an exam by a taciturn female classmate, a buttoned-down freshman agrees to join her on her nightly raids as a cat burglar in return for her silence.'

    fwiw (this is a tad long…):

    ‘After getting caught cheating on an exam by a taciturn female classmate, a buttoned-down freshman agrees to join her on her nightly raids as a cat burglar in return for her silence.’

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