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After Losing a leg in a tragic accident, A star hockey player pursues a return to his former team
If he joined, like, a winter para-Olympian team (not sure if one exits though...) it has legs (pun intended there :) )..... Or if he became the team's coach it could have a good run as well... Best of luck... Hop it goes well... ;)
If he joined, like, a winter para-Olympian team (not sure if one exits though…) it has legs (pun intended there 🙂 )….. Or if he became the team’s coach it could have a good run as well…
Best of luck… Hop it goes well…
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See lessAfter successful neurosurgery, a monk questions his visions of a transcendent being or whether they're symptoms of mental illness.
OOPS! Not Caleb -- I meant AXEL. Soz :)
OOPS! Not Caleb — I meant AXEL. Soz 🙂
See lessAfter successful neurosurgery, a monk questions his visions of a transcendent being or whether they're symptoms of mental illness.
Hi Caleb, I agree with most of the comments already mentioned -- particularly dpg's point in relation to 'questions his visions'; this is internalised action, which really has no place in a logline. It's a juicy set-up, and we need to know what he needs to do (or WHAT he is questioning) PHYSICALLY iRead more
Hi Caleb,
I agree with most of the comments already mentioned — particularly dpg’s point in relation to ‘questions his visions’; this is internalised action, which really has no place in a logline. It’s a juicy set-up, and we need to know what he needs to do (or WHAT he is questioning) PHYSICALLY in the course of the story:
“After life saving brain surgery, a novice monk begins to have visions of a transcendental being who tells him he must murder the leader of his order as a show of faith to God.”
— whilst maybe missing the mark of your story (and not being perfectly structured etc…) the internal struggle is implied by the external forces… He is a young monk (maybe better if at the start of the film is questioning his faith…)who believes that God is telling him to murder — a dilemma which implies a high degree of internal struggle..
Anyway — I think this has a potential to be really juicy stuff.
Best of luck with it.
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