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  1. Posted: July 8, 2013In: Public

    When a woman from another planet falls down from the sky, A father who has lost his wife and son, helps the woman get back to where she came from.

    Tony Edward Samurai
    Added an answer on July 10, 2013 at 10:59 am

    Great point dpg...all the logline needs imo.

    Great point dpg…all the logline needs imo.

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  2. Posted: July 10, 2013In: Public

    Short Film: A frustrated white collar man, unintentionally undergo a comical journey of social scrutiny and conditioning experiences in the park, leading to his awakening/revelation about the society.

    Tony Edward Samurai
    Added an answer on July 10, 2013 at 10:53 am

    I.e. "in an effort to prove his new marketing pitch for fresh fruit a desperate advertising exec strips naked in front of a large lunch time crowd in central park'

    I.e. “in an effort to prove his new marketing pitch for fresh fruit a desperate advertising exec strips naked in front of a large lunch time crowd in central park’

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  3. Posted: July 10, 2013In: Public

    Short Film: A frustrated white collar man, unintentionally undergo a comical journey of social scrutiny and conditioning experiences in the park, leading to his awakening/revelation about the society.

    Tony Edward Samurai
    Added an answer on July 10, 2013 at 10:38 am

    Too much hinting going on here... I think you need to describe exactly what the 'social scrutiny and conditioning experiences' actually are. Leaving this out does not make for an intruiging logline but for a vague one.

    Too much hinting going on here… I think you need to describe exactly what the ‘social scrutiny and conditioning experiences’ actually are. Leaving this out does not make for an intruiging logline but for a vague one.

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