1. Posted: December 31, 2019In:

    An insecure wheelchair-bound girl must learn to rely on her physical abilities and wits as she becomes her friends’ only hope to save them from a pack of zombies.

    Trix Samurai

    I feel like I need more specifics to determine whether it's a film I'd watch or not... "Learn to rely" - are we watching her learning new skills, or does she already have really useful zombie fighting skills that she's not aware of/insecure with using? Why is she their only hope? How does she save tRead more

    I feel like I need more specifics to determine whether it’s a film I’d watch or not…

    • “Learn to rely” – are we watching her learning new skills, or does she already have really useful zombie fighting skills that she’s not aware of/insecure with using?
    • Why is she their only hope?
    • How does she save them?
    • Why does she need physical abilities to save them? – Can’t she do it with her contacts, hacking skills, coordination skills, etc?
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  2. Posted: January 2, 2020In:

    An ambitious young actor begins a passionate love affair with a washed-up but wealthy older actress, however, her family suspect he’s a gold-digger and set out to undermine his career.

    Trix Samurai

    I agree... "ambitious" saves your word count over "trying to break into Hollywood" and carries plenty of weight. I love the idea - looking at insecurities and manipulation from many different viewpoints is something (as an audience!) I relish... it can be especially heart-rending when we don't findRead more

    I agree… “ambitious” saves your word count over “trying to break into Hollywood” and carries plenty of weight.

    I love the idea – looking at insecurities and manipulation from many different viewpoints is something (as an audience!) I relish… it can be especially heart-rending when we don’t find out until the end that we’ve been manipulated too – e.g. family were in it for themselves and he actually loved her.

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  3. Posted: January 3, 2020In:

    When a man wakes up in an unfamiliar bar with no memories, he is compelled to solve the mystery and reconsider his own relationship with death.

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    Trix Samurai

    A couple of thoughts I hope are useful: Do you need 'unfamiliar' bar if he's lost his memory? 'his own relationship with death' sounds like the emphasis is on 'own' - if so, why? Who else is there? And how does getting his memory back relate to his mortality?

    A couple of thoughts I hope are useful:

    • Do you need ‘unfamiliar’ bar if he’s lost his memory?
    • ‘his own relationship with death’ sounds like the emphasis is on ‘own’ – if so, why? Who else is there? And how does getting his memory back relate to his mortality?
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