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  1. Posted: January 7, 2020In: Drama

    After discovering he has a son, an exiled gangster must confront his vengeful ex partner in crime, in order to save the family he abandoned.

    Trix Samurai
    Added an answer on January 7, 2020 at 10:25 pm

    I think the premise could be an intriguing one... but I think it's vague at the moment as to what's happening and why: How did he discover he has a son? ? Is the peril because the ex-partner has discovered he has a son? Why is he exiled? Is he saving the son or the abandoned family (or both)? ?If heRead more

    I think the premise could be an intriguing one… but I think it’s vague at the moment as to what’s happening and why:

    • How did he discover he has a son? ? Is the peril because the ex-partner has discovered he has a son?
    • Why is he exiled?
    • Is he saving the son or the abandoned family (or both)? ?If he abandoned the family previously, why is he bothered about them – or has the son given him a new viewpoint?
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  2. Posted: November 28, 2019In: Historical

    Premise

    Trix Samurai
    Added an answer on January 7, 2020 at 4:57 am

    Why would you switch bodies if you knew you'd suffer afterwards?

    • Why would you switch bodies if you knew you’d suffer afterwards?
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  3. Posted: December 25, 2019In: Crime

    (2nd revision) In order to name his rebellious son as heir to a dynasty that sells raided memories, an aging patriarch must fake a memory of succession inside him, before he fulfills a vow to expose his business.

    Trix Samurai
    Added an answer on January 7, 2020 at 4:55 am

    I struggled to understand exactly what I'd be watching... the following immediately popped into my head: Why would he want a 'rebellious son' to inherit? What are 'raided' memories? - Stolen? Memories of a specific type/for a specific purpose? Why would he plant a fake memory inside himself rather tRead more

    I struggled to understand exactly what I’d be watching… the following immediately popped into my head:

    • Why would he want a ‘rebellious son’ to inherit?
    • What are ‘raided’ memories? – Stolen? Memories of a specific type/for a specific purpose?
    • Why would he plant a fake memory inside himself rather than look for a way to avoid exposing his business? (Or is the son threatening to expose the father?)

    Overall, Im confused.

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