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  1. Posted: May 5, 2013In: Public

    A sentinel fights alone in Sahara when a ghost appears to him suddenly just to advice him to leave his place in order to find love and suceed in it after having failed his first one.

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on May 6, 2013 at 1:51 pm

    "Visited by a ghostly stranger, a lone guard risks life and limb against a controlling rival to find true love."

    “Visited by a ghostly stranger, a lone guard risks life and limb against a controlling rival to find true love.”

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  2. Posted: May 5, 2013In: Public

    When mourning, asocial Josef is stuck with his car in the middle of nowhere he must drive a young, rebellious punkgirl to an audition in order to get home

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on May 6, 2013 at 1:43 pm

    Try to flip the protagonist around. The Punk is the active character while Josef is the passive. "Stuck in the middle of nowhere, a rebellious punk befriends a bitter (occupation)** while trying to get to her big audition on time." This is the concept in its simplest form. A logline isn't concrete,Read more

    Try to flip the protagonist around. The Punk is the active character while Josef is the passive.

    “Stuck in the middle of nowhere, a rebellious punk befriends a bitter (occupation)** while trying to get to her big audition on time.”

    This is the concept in its simplest form. A logline isn’t concrete, get creative and experiment.

    Hope this helps. 😀

    Tor

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  3. Posted: May 5, 2013In: Public

    When a young Vikings village is destroyed, he must get help from the mysterious warrior only known as 'The Dane Axe' in order to get revenge on those who killed his family.

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on May 6, 2013 at 1:31 pm

    "Seeking revenge, a novice viking hunts down his only hope; the mysterious warrior known only as The Dane Axe."

    “Seeking revenge, a novice viking hunts down his only hope; the mysterious warrior known only as The Dane Axe.”

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