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  1. Posted: May 2, 2013In: Public

    When a penniless young writer steals a suitcase full of ?dirty money? a Yakuza enforcer is sent to track him down. The writer would rather kill himself than be captured but the enforcer is under oath to kill himself if he fails.

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on May 2, 2013 at 12:45 pm

    "A suicidal writer is on the run from Yakuza muscle who choose seppuku over failure, after stealing a suitcase full of dirty money." Like the idea.. 1. He may be destitute but the writer's weakness is being suicidal. A weakness is the inner journey a protagonist takes. 2. Try to simplify the idea doRead more

    “A suicidal writer is on the run from Yakuza muscle who choose seppuku over failure, after stealing a suitcase full of dirty money.”

    Like the idea..

    1. He may be destitute but the writer’s weakness is being suicidal. A weakness is the inner journey a protagonist takes.

    2. Try to simplify the idea down. Research the elements of your logline // idea and find words that can sum it up using only one or two.

    Hope this helps 😀

    Tor

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  2. Posted: April 29, 2013In: Public

    A twenty eight year old woman is about to get engaged to her great boyfriend, when the ex she hasn?t gotten over moves back into town. All of a sudden she isn?t sure if her boyfriend is really the one, and so she spends time decorating her ex?s new condo, trying to figure it all out.

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on April 30, 2013 at 6:55 pm

    Im surprised this logline made it to the blacklist.. maybe the script was a decent read

    Im surprised this logline made it to the blacklist.. maybe the script was a decent read

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  3. Posted: April 29, 2013In: Public

    When a young, lonely boy discovers a living, damaged, patchwork-teddybear in the attic of the house he just moved into, he promises to help his secret friend to find his former owner. But finding the guy would mean losing the new friend…

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on April 29, 2013 at 6:23 pm

    "What started as a promise, a lonely boy is reluctant to help a teddybear find their previous owner."

    “What started as a promise, a lonely boy is reluctant to help a teddybear find their previous owner.”

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