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  1. Posted: April 24, 2013In: Public

    The Greek gods and goddesses from myth are very much real, callous, and they are all coming for an unsuspecting 16-year-old Alexandra Adler, whether she likes it or not.

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on April 24, 2013 at 10:50 am

    "A teenage goddess is the only thing standing between humanities survival from the wrath of Mt. Olympus." This in some cases can be all that is needed but ask yourself is this the best logline you want to represent your hours of hard work. Tell your friends, relatives and strangers and see their reaRead more

    “A teenage goddess is the only thing standing between humanities survival from the wrath of Mt. Olympus.”

    This in some cases can be all that is needed but ask yourself is this the best logline you want to represent your hours of hard work. Tell your friends, relatives and strangers and see their reaction. This is the best way to “shop around” and get valuable insight from non-movie makers that pay money to see films.

    Now that we have a basic concept we MUST include a clear Goal, Stakes & Urgency.

    1)
    The goal is to save humanity but how is she going to attempt that ??
    Is she going to dethrone Zeus by destroying his crown in the bowls of Hades or unleash the titans ??

    2)
    What is she risking ??
    Is this a love story and she loves a mortal teenage boy ?? What is her connection with Earth // humanity ??

    3)
    Why is she doing it now ?? Why is she forced to act ??
    Is there a time element that she has to overcome ?? What is facing her as an obstacle that is impending ??

    Hope this helps 😀

    Tor

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  2. Posted: April 24, 2013In: Public

    The Greek gods and goddesses from myth are very much real, callous, and they are all coming for an unsuspecting 16-year-old Alexandra Adler, whether she likes it or not.

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on April 24, 2013 at 8:39 am

    First thing that comes to mind is: PERCY JACKSON & THE LIGHTNING THIEF, except in this logline its a girl and instead of Poseidon its Zeus. Always do some research of your concept first to see if there is something like // similar out there. This will save you countless hours and as easy as I coRead more

    First thing that comes to mind is: PERCY JACKSON & THE LIGHTNING THIEF, except in this logline its a girl and instead of Poseidon its Zeus. Always do some research of your concept first to see if there is something like // similar out there. This will save you countless hours and as easy as I could see it, there will be a producer // reader who passes on this because of the relation.

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  3. Posted: April 23, 2013

    After convincing his reformed felon brother to hold up the bank where the map to a lost goldmine is stored, a disenchanted insurance salesman must finish the job himself when his brother is shot dead by the obstinate bank manager during the heist

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on April 23, 2013 at 4:34 pm

    "A disenchanted salesman is forced to finish his dead brother?s dirty work when a bank heist goes south. "

    “A disenchanted salesman is forced to finish his dead brother?s dirty work when a bank heist goes south. “

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