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An envious thief is caught in the crossfire after stealing a car that harbors the recently abducted First Lady.
I completely agree with the superfluous feedback, but the theme // set-up focuses on this aspect of the protagonist. The reason for choosing it also was "How would someone, envious of other peoples lives solve their own life."
I completely agree with the superfluous feedback, but the theme // set-up focuses on this aspect of the protagonist. The reason for choosing it also was “How would someone, envious of other peoples lives solve their own life.”
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Sounds a lot like "Kick Ass" combined with "Mystery Men", don't get me wrong I LOVE THOSE MOVIES but the key to your logline would be the uniqueness of your story. What haven't we seen before ?? What separates this and would make a producer // studio want to read it ?? In Kick Ass, Dave even says atRead more
Sounds a lot like “Kick Ass” combined with “Mystery Men”, don’t get me wrong I LOVE THOSE MOVIES but the key to your logline would be the uniqueness of your story.
What haven’t we seen before ??
What separates this and would make a producer // studio want to read it ??
In Kick Ass, Dave even says at the end that he has inspired a new generation of heroes therefor unknowingly assumes the leader position.
Take BTTF (Back To The Future), at the time, time travelling had been done in every way possible. What they did was focus on what story aspects where original. This is why the DeLorean takes a backseat (excuse the humour) and becomes more about Marty having a future to return to. So then it is all about a “what if” scenario.
Using this reference, give the inept leader a goal that isn’t cliche. Instead of a rogue member, what if he crosses the group ?? Like what Shrek has to face in the first film.
Hope this helps 😀
Tor
See lessAn envious thief is caught in the crossfire after stealing a car that harbors the recently abducted First Lady.
A thief always wants what they cant have and is envious of others possessions // lifestyles, its the crux of many a crime, thriller and action movie. This is the trigger that gets him involved in the unlikely event because without it he wouldn't want the car.
A thief always wants what they cant have and is envious of others possessions // lifestyles, its the crux of many a crime, thriller and action movie. This is the trigger that gets him involved in the unlikely event because without it he wouldn’t want the car.
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