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An ambitious football player (Giorgio) moves to Argentina, following his mentor Diego Maradona. Having a big dream to play professionally, the challenges that he overcomes are numerous. A friendship with a local friend helps him reach the top of football sector. The woman of his life proves to be much closer to him than he though. He keeps trying to put together a hard puzzle ? the game of life.
"Following his dream to play professionally, an ambitious football player is forced to overcome cultural barriers to play for Argentina in the World Cup." 1) What is the protagonist's goal ?? Is there a specific trophy. 2) Names are not necessary BUT you can include Diego Maradona in this instance bRead more
“Following his dream to play professionally, an ambitious football player is forced to overcome cultural barriers to play for Argentina in the World Cup.”
1)
What is the protagonist’s goal ??
Is there a specific trophy.
2)
Names are not necessary BUT you can include Diego Maradona in this instance because he is a well known celebrity // historical figure, if this is important to your logline.
3)
Try to keep the concept minimal. Focus on what the hero’s journey is before adding supporting characters. The woman is a relationship in the story but the story is not about him and her.
4)
We know the difficulty the protagonist is facing. Therefore it becomes Irrelevant to include info such as “He keeps trying to put together a hard puzzle – the game of life.” This is more of a tagline.
Hope this helps. 😀
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Your absolutely right dpg. This is an issue that faced "The Ring". This could be solved by a couple of ways: 1) It only happens when she takes pictures of her son. 2) She discovers old photos of a doppleganger that resembles her son as a victim from decades earlier. 3) Her son discovers the camera aRead more
Your absolutely right dpg.
This is an issue that faced “The Ring”. This could be solved by a couple of ways:
1)
It only happens when she takes pictures of her son.
2)
She discovers old photos of a
doppleganger that resembles her son as a victim from decades earlier.
3)
Her son discovers the camera and takes pictures not aware of the effect.
There is a slew of remedies to consider. But without that link, this is a forced situation where
the son is a sub-par passive character. To raise the stakes within the concept based just on her
would make a more compelling logline. Then when that can be done and the son aspect can be worked in to benefit it, it might be the best approach.
What is she risking personally ??
In the ring they BOTH watch the same video so everything that is happening to her,
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If you goto the "How to write it?" section of this site over @ https://loglines.org/howto/ it will help to explain and understand the basics of creating the core concept of a logline :D Hope this helps.
If you goto the “How to write it?” section of this site over @ https://loglines.org/howto/ it will help to explain and understand the basics of creating the core concept of a logline 😀 Hope this helps.
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