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  1. Posted: April 17, 2013

    A college photography student who discovers terrifying images of ghostly children in her shots of an abandoned amusement park races to uncover a decades-old mystery to save her son from the vengeful spirits.

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on April 18, 2013 at 1:42 pm

    "When a reckless student discovers images of spirit photography on her camera, she attempts to solve the slayings that took place decades ago, risking her only son."

    “When a reckless student discovers images of spirit photography on her camera,
    she attempts to solve the slayings that took place decades ago, risking her only son.”

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  2. Posted: April 17, 2013In: Public

    After finding her teenage son in bed with the town scamp, an overprotective mother hires a prostitute to pose as a student at her sons High School in an effort to lure him away from his budding new romance. But when the son falls for the alluring money hungry prostitute things quickly spiral out of control.

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on April 18, 2013 at 1:33 pm

    Have you considered using the prostitute as you main protagonist ?? In the logline, the mother and son are passive and the prostitute is active. "Contacted by a militant mother, a greedy prostitute attempts to pose as a high school student to break up the budding romance of her boss' son."

    Have you considered using the prostitute as you main protagonist ??

    In the logline, the mother and son are passive and the prostitute is active.

    “Contacted by a militant mother, a greedy prostitute attempts to pose
    as a high school student to break up the budding romance of her boss’ son.”

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  3. Posted: April 12, 2013In: Public

    After her friend accidentally discovers time travel through memory research, a habitually cautious woman risks her sanity and ultimately her father's life by returning to her early teen years to prevent her Charlston-socialite mother's murder.

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on April 17, 2013 at 12:03 am

    "After the discovery of time travel through memory research, a cautious (occupation)** re-lives adolescence to prevent the murder of her mother at the toll of her (own sanity OR father?s fate)**."

    “After the discovery of time travel through memory research,
    a cautious (occupation)** re-lives adolescence
    to prevent the murder of her mother at the toll of her (own sanity OR father?s fate)**.”

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