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  1. Posted: April 15, 2013In: Public

    Accused of ruining her sister?s wedding and future happiness, Annabelle must battle it out with her father who sees only the worst in her, leaving Annabelle more determined to leave the family grudges and insecurities behind her.

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on April 15, 2013 at 3:35 pm

    1) Who is Annabelle ?? Include an occupation and weakness to identify the main protagonist. Names are usually reserved for historical figures of celebrities. 2) What specifically is she battling ?? In legally Blonde & Billy Madison they both have to prove their worth by attending school. Make itRead more

    1)
    Who is Annabelle ??
    Include an occupation and weakness to identify the main protagonist.
    Names are usually reserved for historical figures of celebrities.

    2)
    What specifically is she battling ??
    In legally Blonde & Billy Madison they both have to prove
    their worth by attending school. Make it unique and specific to your story.

    3)
    What happens if she doesn’t leave the families faults behind her ??
    Maybe a good story piece would be to have something from her fathers past meet up with her.
    This could help in strengthening the relationship and ad conflict they have to overcome together.

    Hope this helps 😀

    Tor

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  2. Posted: April 15, 2013In: Public

    After a troubled teen girl is caught vandalizing state property, she is ordered to spend 6 months in juvenile detention center; where she falls in love with the, married, faculty art teacher.

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on April 15, 2013 at 3:28 pm

    "Caught vandalizing state property, a troubled teen is forced to spend six months at a juvenile detention centre, where she falls in love with a married art teacher."

    “Caught vandalizing state property, a troubled teen
    is forced to spend six months at a juvenile detention centre,
    where she falls in love with a married art teacher.”

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  3. Posted: April 15, 2013In: Public

    When Air Force One crashes, a journalist discovers a cover up after gaining access to the plane?s black box data and must unravel the mystery.

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on April 15, 2013 at 9:33 am

    This is only the inciting incident. Exploit of the hook rather than the story in this case.

    This is only the inciting incident.
    Exploit of the hook rather than the story in this case.

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