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  1. Posted: April 11, 2013In: Public

    Posing as a prostitute, a moral housewife penetrates the underground sex-trade in order to find her missing gigolo son.

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on April 12, 2013 at 10:31 am

    dpg: We know she is a mother because "... gigolo son.". By being a housewife, this leads her to explore the unknown world with a sheltered eye and gives rise to interesting interactions. Remember, a good logline is about conflict. Taking a housewife from her home into a sleazy brothel creates confliRead more

    dpg:

    We know she is a mother because “… gigolo son.”.
    By being a housewife, this leads her to explore the unknown world
    with a sheltered eye and gives rise to interesting interactions.

    Remember, a good logline is about conflict.

    Taking a housewife from her home into a sleazy brothel creates conflict = story.

    The urgency also is naturally there with finding her missing son,
    but if needed, something like: “… gigolo son before her catholic husband’s weekend baptism.”.
    This gives us a “ticking clock” and adds urgency through a pressured situation full of conflict.

    Hope this helps 😀

    Tor

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  2. Posted: April 11, 2013In: Public

    Posing as a prostitute, a moral housewife penetrates the underground sex-trade in order to find her missing gigolo son.

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on April 11, 2013 at 6:38 pm

    <3 Can't wait to read the script !!

    <3 Can't wait to read the script !!

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  3. Posted: April 7, 2013In: Student Loglines

    On his 18th birthday, a young, man is going to paint a train, like he?s done countless times before, but this time he meets with two rival gangs, that engage in a deadly battle, which attracts the attention of the local police, and being 18, risks incarceration if he is caught.

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on April 7, 2013 at 9:43 pm

    "While graffitiing a train, a careless teenager is caught between two street gangs in a rivalry that attracts the attention of the local police on his 18th birthday."

    “While graffitiing a train, a careless teenager is caught between two street gangs in a rivalry that attracts the attention of the local police on his 18th birthday.”

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