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The chronicles of Nomar Kendrapall, the dying emperor of a crumbling galactic empire, as he struggles to maintain control while his sociopathic son hatches Machiavellian schemes to usurp the throne, his rivals jockey for power, and an alien empire threatens to re-ignite an interstellar war.
Information overload !! As Richiev said, your last logline was vastly better and had the punch of a great hook // story.. Never use a name(s) unless its for a well known historical figure ie. Lincoln.. Keep the concept simple and unique, don't overdo.. You had us at hello the first time !! Happy wriRead more
Information overload !!
As Richiev said, your last logline was vastly better and had the punch of a great hook // story..
Never use a name(s) unless its for a well known historical figure ie. Lincoln..
Keep the concept simple and unique, don’t overdo.. You had us at hello the first time !!
Happy writing 😀
Tor
See lessHaunted by his past, a chance encounter forces Matthew to face his truth as he battles to survive the trials of the First World War.
Some questions to ask yourself and to help include in a revised logline: What is he haunted by ?? What is the chance encounter ?? Who is Matthew ?? (Be specific without using a name.. ("... forces a (weakness)** soldier to...")) What is he fighting ?? What is the truth ?? What is the trial of the fiRead more
Some questions to ask yourself and to help include in a revised logline:
What is he haunted by ??
What is the chance encounter ??
Who is Matthew ?? (Be specific without using a name.. (“… forces a (weakness)** soldier to…”))
What is he fighting ??
What is the truth ??
What is the trial of the first world war ??
Adding specifics defines your story and makes it unique..
Happy writing 😀
Tor
See lessAn air guitar band is rising up to be one of the greats in the music industry, but when a rival band gets signed to the same label, they struggle to keep their novelty act valid.
In "The Runaways", there still was a central character that the story revolved around.. Choose a main protagonist in the band and develop the story around their experience // journey.. "A rising (weakness)** air guitarist faces fierce competition from a former rival signed to the same label." By conRead more
In “The Runaways”, there still was a central character that the story revolved around..
Choose a main protagonist in the band and develop the story around their experience // journey..
“A rising (weakness)** air guitarist faces fierce competition from a former rival signed to the same label.”
By condensing your concept down, you can work out where to add and subtract elements..
What do they have to do to keep the act valid ??
What is the urgency to their goal ??
Happy writing 😀
Tor
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