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A dysfunctional group of skaters band together to survive when an anti-terrorist exercise turns the residents of their New England island home into blood-sucking zompires.
WOW I would suggest "... band together to survive after an anti-terrorist..." Also is there a more clearer goal than to survive ?? Other than that congrats on the awesome concept // logline !! Happy writing :D Tor
WOW
I would suggest “… band together to survive after an anti-terrorist…”
Also is there a more clearer goal than to survive ??
Other than that congrats on the awesome concept // logline !!
Happy writing 😀
Tor
See lessWhen a young man discovers that he is a clone of a dead scientist he wants to find out why the scientist cloned himself, while keeping the fact that he is a clone a secret and getting on with his life.
It is very hard to read on a first take.. Remember to strip it down to the essentials then build from there: After discovering he is a clone of a dead scientist, a (insert weakness)** (insert occupation)** journeys to find out why he was created while keeping the secret hidden from view...? Is the wRead more
It is very hard to read on a first take..
Remember to strip it down to the essentials then build from there:
After discovering he is a clone of a dead scientist, a (insert weakness)** (insert occupation)** journeys to find out why he was created while keeping the secret hidden from view…?
Is the weakness being nihilistic ??
What is he risking to get the information ??
How far is he willing to go to make it happen ??
What obstacles are standing in his way ??
What is the urgency facing our protagonist ??
Create a logline with as much uniqueness that helps the reader easily identify the premise // concept..
Happy writing 😀
Tor
See lessRemoved by poster. Plz remove
"Travelling back to 1945, a paranoid Russian spy must escort a nuclear scientist into the future to win the second cold war." Hope this helps :D Tor
“Travelling back to 1945, a paranoid Russian spy must
escort a nuclear scientist into the future to win the second cold war.”
Hope this helps 😀
Tor
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