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  1. Posted: April 15, 2013In: Public

    Evading a nationwide manhunt, a twenty-first-century Dr. Jekyll attempts to clear his name before his split personality, Mr. Hyde, assassinates the president of the U.S.A.

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on April 16, 2013 at 6:28 pm

    "Evading a nationwide manhunt, a 21st century Dr. Jekyll attempts to clear his name before his split personality, Mr. Hyde, assassinates the president of the U.S.A."

    “Evading a nationwide manhunt, a 21st century Dr. Jekyll
    attempts to clear his name before his split personality,
    Mr. Hyde, assassinates the president of the U.S.A.”

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  2. Posted: April 15, 2013In: Public

    A cosmonaut plagued with crippling anxiety who wants to make a difference in the world must attempt to prevent an impending global energy crisis by collecting a newly found energy source on a seemingly desolate planet in deep space.

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on April 16, 2013 at 6:15 pm

    "Selected by the UN in an attempt to prevent the global energy crisis, an astronaut with crippling anxiety is forced to harvest a newly discovered resource from a seemingly desolate planet." Remember to breakdown the concept into its purest form.

    “Selected by the UN in an attempt to prevent
    the global energy crisis, an astronaut with crippling anxiety is forced to
    harvest a newly discovered resource from a seemingly desolate planet.”

    Remember to breakdown the concept into its purest form.

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  3. Posted: April 15, 2013In: Public

    A dysfunctional Aussie neighborhood where a lovable though politically incorrect Ernie, battles daily to accept the fact that he is no longer young.

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on April 15, 2013 at 3:41 pm

    This sounds more character than plot. 1) Why is it affecting him now ?? What is the incident that has triggered this. 2) What is Ernie battling for to overcome his flaw ?? 3) What is he risking to not be seen as old ?? Hope this helps :D Tor

    This sounds more character than plot.

    1)
    Why is it affecting him now ??
    What is the incident that has triggered this.

    2)
    What is Ernie battling for to overcome his flaw ??

    3)
    What is he risking to not be seen as old ??

    Hope this helps 😀

    Tor

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