Thanks for the link timmyelliot, i’ll surely check it out and bryson, i remember you said earlier on, you can’t truly please everybody, lol, you can start from explaining the “element of believability” that’s missing. I’ll probably be able to “find it” and if you can’t i guess then i’m getting close to perfection. The revision is actually a suggestion from someone, just want to see how it’ll work. Thanks for reading the post all the same.