1. Posted: June 3, 2016In:

    A woman wakes from an experiment she can?t remember signing up for, and is told she can leave as soon as the rest of her memories return. But when the other patients start disappearing without a trace, she begins to doubt whether the memory existed in the first place.

    Wayne Logliner

    It?s a little hard to understand.? Maybe you could clarify the setting. (a future lab?)? I think you could cut down on a few words to make it more concise and give the main character a better title than ?Woman?.? + give her a flaw.. something to make her interesting? ?

    It?s a little hard to understand.? Maybe you could clarify the setting. (a future lab?)? I think you could cut down on a few words to make it more concise and give the main character a better title than ?Woman?.? + give her a flaw.. something to make her interesting? ?

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  2. Posted: March 8, 2016In:

    After receiving his late mother?s camera, the outcast son wants to become a photographer, but once his older brother, the glorified heir, dies, the manipulative grandfather resorts to blackmail to force his own grandson to take over the farm.

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    Wayne Logliner

    I'm a little confused.? Why does the grandfather blackmail? If we know why the grandfather wants to blackmail it might make more sense.? Who is the main character? - the outcast son or the grandfather.

    I’m a little confused.? Why does the grandfather blackmail? If we know why the grandfather wants to blackmail it might make more sense.? Who is the main character? – the outcast son or the grandfather.

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  3. Posted: August 2, 2015In:

    When a father, just diagnosed with depression, learns that his sweetheart has an even more debilitating mental illness, he must evaluate the relationship and learn the importance of their love.

    Wayne Logliner

    Have started again here: https://loglines.org/when-he-learns-that-his-partner-has-a-borderline-personality-disorder-a-depressed-guy-endeavours-to-fix-a-relationship-disrupted-by-a-cloud-of-mental-illness/

    Have started again here:

    https://loglines.org/when-he-learns-that-his-partner-has-a-borderline-personality-disorder-a-depressed-guy-endeavours-to-fix-a-relationship-disrupted-by-a-cloud-of-mental-illness/

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