1. Posted: October 5, 2013In:

    Killing is what he is afraid of. The circumstantial choice of becoming a writer because of his past costs him desertion and rejection from her lover. The writer never gives up. After several years of exploration and reaching the new highs he becomes the Times Contributor Of the Year to prove his mettle. All fame and name is enough, but he realizes why still he is not at peace and kills himself when at his peak.

    wilsondownunder Penpusher

    Try and tell us what your story is about in one sentence. Your lead character and their mission. Good luck

    Try and tell us what your story is about in one sentence. Your lead character and their mission.

    Good luck

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  2. Posted: October 5, 2013In:

    When a playboy, slacker returns to join his father?s growing corporate empire, tensions mount between his toe-the-line older brother over who is better suited to run the company.

    wilsondownunder Penpusher

    To me it's clear that the slacker is the protagonist, his brother the antagonist. I agree tere needs to be another element though. A dying dad could be it - the will is yet to be finalized and he has to prove himself. A board might be good too. The dad has passed away and they have to appoint the CERead more

    To me it’s clear that the slacker is the protagonist, his brother the antagonist. I agree tere needs to be another element though. A dying dad could be it – the will is yet to be finalized and he has to prove himself. A board might be good too. The dad has passed away and they have to appoint the CEO by a certain day. To be successful though I think the toe-the-line brother would need to be corrupt in the end. You probably already have this in mind – otherwise in reality your protagonist will lose

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  3. Posted: September 25, 2013In:

    When an author encounters the characters he writes in the real world, creating a number of awkward and humorous moments, he must help them assimilate or return to the stories they belong in.

    wilsondownunder Penpusher

    I'm not saying you adopt this but it's just an idea to show how you could pitch it - you could make him an author of any genre - maybe he's a romance novelist and his lead character becomes obsessed with him etc

    I’m not saying you adopt this but it’s just an idea to show how you could pitch it – you could make him an author of any genre – maybe he’s a romance novelist and his lead character becomes obsessed with him etc

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