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  1. Posted: September 20, 2013In: Student Loglines

    When a german soldier deserts he come across a jewish family and together they try to flee the country while being hunted by german soldiers.

    wilsondownunder Penpusher
    Added an answer on September 21, 2013 at 1:48 pm

    *reducing

    *reducing

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  2. Posted: September 20, 2013In: Student Loglines

    When a german soldier deserts he come across a jewish family and together they try to flee the country while being hunted by german soldiers.

    wilsondownunder Penpusher
    Added an answer on September 21, 2013 at 1:47 pm

    Hi, I immediately identified with this being Nazi related though it wouldn't hurt to specify the fact. It's a good idea. I like it. I'd suggest reducgint the title to simply "Hunted" but up to you good luck

    Hi,

    I immediately identified with this being Nazi related though it wouldn’t hurt to specify the fact. It’s a good idea. I like it. I’d suggest reducgint the title to simply “Hunted” but up to you

    good luck

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  3. Posted: September 20, 2013In: Public

    When a warphotographer is questioned regarding the fate of a girlsoldier in her prizewinning photo, she must find out what happened to the girl, or risk losing both her professional reputation and her mind. //Anya

    wilsondownunder Penpusher
    Added an answer on September 21, 2013 at 1:43 pm

    Hi I think it's credible to have a photographer want to know what happened to the subject of her prize winning photo but I'm not sure why she would need to discover this to retain her credibility - photographers in these environments often don't know their subjects - I'm not sure if there would be aRead more

    Hi

    I think it’s credible to have a photographer want to know what happened to the subject of her prize winning photo but I’m not sure why she would need to discover this to retain her credibility – photographers in these environments often don’t know their subjects – I’m not sure if there would be an expectation to either.

    If however it was the case that the subject of her photo needed help and the photographer didn’t provide it – choosing art of humanity – I could see why people might question their integrity. I believe there was a prize winning photographer who commited suicide after being criticised for taking a photo of a young boy being attacked in the wild rather than intervening and helping.

    Maybe up the stakes. Who is threatening your photographer/making them obsess over the subject of the photo and why? You may already have this as the story – if so, reflect it in your logline.

    good luck.

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