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Agree with the others. As well, clarify if it's production and not just distribution because it's hard to see depravity with the latter. With depravity, greed becomes secondary or an assumed part of it.
Even if this is based on someone real, try to strengthen the hook and family part so that this can be more than 'Boogie Nights in Texas'.
Does his goal become getting back with his family?
Is this based upon? by a real life character?
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