To relive his childhood, a mentally ill writer decided to bring his 1950s sitcom to life by pitching it his script to executives.

Tell us the effect he is hoping to achieve?

Relive his past by having a show made don’t really connect. The story isn’t hanging together.

Many famous writers suffer from manic depression. What if you wrote your logline from the perspective of a recently diagnosed writer who is hell-bent on getting his 1950s sitcom greenlit to relive his childhood?

Hope this helps.

How? What specifically is he going to do? That needs to be in the logline.