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Three fathers learn of their teenage daughters? pact to lose their virginity on prom night and band together to stop them.
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This logline seems to be all there. It has the feel of over the top comedy and we understand the fathers goal.
I might add an adjective such as “Over Protective” and you could also change “band together” to “scheme” but overall we get a sense of the story from this logline.
Good luck with this!
I like it. I laughed when I read it.
I would probably see this movie. I think this logline works well because I envisioned three comedic actors in the roles – if we can picture it, it must be good! 🙂
This sounds like a fresh spin on the “losing your virginity on prom night” genre. Definitely would watch. My only query regarding the logline is that it’d be good to get a greater sense of WHAT the fathers intend to do in order to stop their daughters’ pact. But to be honest, it’s evocative enough without it. Can definitely picture scenes from this film from the logline alone.
Very simple, to the point, and has a great concept. Immediately spawns all sorts of visions and possibilities. Very nice!