When a nerdy Greek scholarship holder fall in love with his popstar fellow student, they face a long-distance relationship as she is on world tour always traveling and he threatens to lose his top-mark college grant due to lovesickness.

Hello, I remember old versions of this… I think you still spread the interest on too many events – my personal opinion is that you have to pick the one inciting event, the one problem, the one goal. Focus on a single storyline. This movie can’t start with a young greak dreaming to be accepted in an american college, winning the grant,?winning the?love of a popstar, facing lovesickness… this could work in a book, maybe.

For exemple,

When his popstar grilfriend leaves for?a world tour, a neardy geek must beat?his lovesickness to keep his college grant.

But there are still many problems, because how can a fight against lovesickness be filmed? What we will see in the movie? And the genre should be clear, is it a love drama or a comedy?