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EDITED: When a government experiment goes awry, a docile housewife teams up with an ambitious genetic engineer to defend New York City from the man-eating children created from her eggs

EDITED: When a government experiment goes awry, a docile housewife teams up with an ambitious genetic engineer to defend New York City from the man-eating children created from her eggs
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    1. Samurai

      This is actually kind of awesome.! I have no idea how ‘marketable’ this is as a movie, but probably has at least some potential as a horror/action type of movie. I hope the script you have in mind goes over the top, as your logline suggests…

      A couple of suggestions for the logline-

      1. Just to clarify, I would add something like this to the beginning- “When an experiment to cure cancer goes awry,” (or whatever the original goal of her research was.)
      2. Instead of teaming up with the armed forces, change that to the main character that assists her, and then characterize that person with an appropriate adjective. Having an interesting combo will add further interest to your story.
      3. An adjective to describe your genetic engineer- is she inexperienced or young, or older, or impulsive, etc.?

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