A horrendous tragedy befalls the Golden Boy of corporate America and his Fiancé forcing them to deal with it in two different but equally destructive ways, taking one of them to the brink of life and death.

Which one of them does it take to the brink of death and what does? Leaving a logline on a question isn't usually a good idea as it is trying to tell the story not tease it.

Which one of them does it take to the brink of death and what does? Leaving a logline on a question isn't usually a good idea as it is trying to tell the story not tease it.

So a brutal rape destroys their relationship. ?Okay, that is the making of a traumatic inciting incident. ?And it's an unusual choice to make the female the stronger character, the one who is more resilient.

Now ?there needs to be a clarification as to his "demons". ?What, specifically, are they? ?Alcoholism, drug abuse, depression? ?All of the above? ?

And what becomes his objective goal, his m.o. for defeating his "demons"?

Or his objective goal something he must struggle to accomplish in spite of his "demons"?

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