When the body of the Mayor’s son is discovered on the reservation and a young indian is accused, the local cop must go back to his own Indian culture to solve the case and learn to accept his own heritage.

I think the story is intriguing - if nothing else, seems we're all in agreement about that. (So definitely write this bad boy!)

I think Tony's version is tighter, but agree with him that "uncovering more than the case" doesn't work particularly well. So maybe try working the beginning of his logline draft into a new version of your own?

Great work Louise.

That hank you for your valuable opinion.

That hank you for your valuable opinion.