Hot Flush is a four-part comedy-thriller about four recently-retired, over-60 women suddenly plunged into financial dire straits, due to cheating husbands and bankrupt pension companies, who — faced with no alternative – turn to a life of crime

I wouldn't have much else to suggest from whgat's already been said -- but -- you should not actually state the genre in the logline -- the genre should be implicit through the contents of the logline itself without having to come right out and say it... Also, I'm confused by 'four-part'..? Does this mean Four Acts? Or like, a mini series?

Best of luck though,.. a tight and potentially entertaining premise.

I did not use "come out of retirement" to imply a previous life of crime; rather they retired from ordinary, legal jobs. And then got sucker-punched by events and people they trusted.

Agree with nicholasandrewhalls: it would strengthen your logline to specify the criminal activity they chose to engage in.

The economic plight of retirees is very, very topical. Good luck with your idea.

I did not use "come out of retirement" to imply a previous life of crime; rather they retired from ordinary, legal jobs. And then got sucker-punched by events and people they trusted.

Agree with nicholasandrewhalls: it would strengthen your logline to specify the criminal activity they chose to engage in.

The economic plight of retirees is very, very topical. Good luck with your idea.