After being dumped a woman must survive in the city without her sugar daddy boyfriend and avoid the millennial fate, moving home with her parents.
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After being dumped a woman must survive in the city without her sugar daddy boyfriend and avoid the millennial fate, moving home with her parents.
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Shyla,
The fate of moving back in with your parents is not a final restitution for a main character. What you need to focus on is the adventure she is thrust upon and what she must overcome in order to avoid her ultimate fate of failure.
Think the movie Adentures in babysitting for direction.
A woman must survive...
“After being dumped by her sugar daddy, a spoiled millennial must (Do this thing) if she is to avoid the terrible fate of moving back in with her controlling parents.”
What Foxtrot25 wrote.
Define her in action towards a goal.
Also, the stakes seem very low. Sure, moving back in with the folks is not nice, but it ain’t story worthy not nice. What else can you give her as a motivation to make it on her own?
Good log lines have a sense of irony – what you are describing sound like everyday life. Ho hum. Irony in Tootsie was, a man who is not nice to women (he uses them) has to dress up like a woman to get a job. Wow! What a turning of the tables. So, maybe there’s a relationship between the sugar daddy and his parents. Maybe it’s her dad’s ex-business partner, and the dad has no idea this was going on?
When a sugar daddy dumps his girlfriend, a daughter of an ex-business partner, the high school drop-out who loved living the rich life?returns to?real daddy and begins to plan?a way to?regain her glamorous lifestyle when he reveals that his ex-business partner stole all his money, money she now considers rightfully hers!