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Posted: 2017-09-20T08:55:34+10:00 In:

Comedy: BLUE BALL BIOSPHERE The 4 YEAR BIOSPHERE EXPERIMENT goes haywire when the 4 WOMEN turn out to be Lesbians and the 4 MEN do all they can to break out!

Comedy: BLUE BALL BIOSPHERE The 4 YEAR BIOSPHERE EXPERIMENT goes haywire when the 4 WOMEN turn out to be Lesbians and the 4 MEN do all they can to break out!
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    4 Reviews

    1. Logliner

      No CAPS. The story needs a hero and his/her evolution to acheive a stated aim.

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    2. Singularity

      What Leaon wrote.

      Check out the ‘Formula’ tab to learn about logline conventions.

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    3. Logliner

      Yes, it’s more of a sketch.? Hahaha? — really needs work now that I see it up here.? That’s the great thing about this and Karel Segers having this opportunity.? Thanks Karel.? And Leon and Nir.

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    4. Logliner

      Here is a newer logline:? A Scientist and Psychologist Couple manipulate the 2 Year Biosphere Living Experiment by selecting 4 lesbian Women and 4 heterosexual men. As the men go sex-crazy the Scientist allows them out for an evening, which ruins her psychological experiment and the couple, now accidentally locked inside, are at war with each other also.

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