When a man?s new world crashes down around him because his old world comes calling, he unleashes hell on everyone responsible ? starting at the bottom and working his way up.
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When a man?s new world crashes down around him because his old world comes calling, he unleashes hell on everyone responsible ? starting at the bottom and working his way up.
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So pretty much most action movies…
I refer you to my comment about the importance of clarity and detail in loglines on your other post.
small enquiry
1. what’s new world
2. what’s old world
3. what’s new world crashing down
4. what’s old world comes calling
5. what’s his unleashing hell on every one responsible
6. who is responsible
7. responsible for what
8. what’s at the bottom
9. what’s way up
Apart from that it reads just fine
PS. I appreciate your brevity, but if you had any real idea it would be much better…
It’s weird
In 2014 alone, three films match your logline
“John Wick”, “The Equaliser” & “Everly”
I was thinking ?a history of violence?
Agree with the others.? The story is generic, vague.? It needs to be filled out with specific details that distinguish it from all the other films about a man ruthlessly seeking revenge.
“When his KGB arch enemy tracks him down, a retired CIA agent turned dog whisperer must unleash the hounds on his former enemy while keeping his former life secret from his straight-laced Presbyterian wife.”