When the most trusting man in America journeys to Nigeria to collect his expected inheritance promised to him in an e-mail by a prince, he must overcome bitter reality and find his prince in order to see the good in people once again.

Is too big a call to label him the most trusting man in America.? How can to substantiate that??

I guess he is over-trusting.? Or naive or gullible.

It seems "journey to Nigeria" and "find his prince" are one in the same, so no need to repeat it.

Why is he "his" prince?? Instead of "a" prince.? Does he own him? ? If you are implying that he needs to find a metaphorical prince (to find "good in people"), it's not clear.

I wouldn't mention "email" - it's too confusing.

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Loved this idea it could be very funny!

Loved this idea it could be very funny!