Good logline?

by Luce · Logliner · 120 pts September 30, 2018 587 views

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Unable to afford living alone in the city, Kay finds herself homeless. She moves in with her best friend and his girlfriend. The bonds of friendship are tested as the co exist in a one bedroom apartment.

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Valentin · Maestro · 3,580 pts October 1, 2018

Like suggested before, please?Follow the link Our Formula on the top of the page that will guide you on the expected format of a logline.
What you describe is not a logline, but a situation or a resume of the introduction.

Former member · 114,968 pts October 1, 2018

Is the script for a feature film or for a pilot script for a TV or VOD series?

dogger · Oracle · 88,020 pts October 1, 2018

Is the script for a feature film or for a pilot script for a TV or VOD series?

Good logline?

5 reviews

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