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After an outbound insurance sales call ends in a supernatural plea for help from a terrified mother, a geeky telemarketer who can locate anything must overcome the trauma his ability once caused him in order to save a kidnapped girl.
He has this gift, yes. He doesn't know if anyone else does (and it doesn't come up in the script) In this script that is the only thing that departs from the normal rules. (Though I'm considering pitching this as…
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After an outbound insurance sales call ends in a supernatural plea for help from a terrified mother, a geeky telemarketer who can locate anything must overcome the trauma his ability once caused him in order to save a kidnapped girl.
Hmm... well, to explain: In the script he hears two overlapping conversations over the phone from the same woman: One that's really happening at that moment and one that's kind of like eavesdropping on a panicked phone call she's going…
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After an outbound insurance sales call ends in a supernatural plea for help from a terrified mother, a geeky telemarketer who can locate anything must overcome the trauma his ability once caused him in order to save a kidnapped girl.
Okay, big re-edit. I can see just how much I wasn't communicating through the original line. Take a look and let me know. :)
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After an outbound insurance sales call ends in a supernatural plea for help from a terrified mother, a geeky telemarketer who can locate anything must overcome the trauma his ability once caused him in order to save a kidnapped girl.
Man, these are great notes. I can see that this is not clearly communicating the main plot line. I need to take some time and work on it and come back so I don't nickel and dime your comments into…
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After an outbound insurance sales call ends in a supernatural plea for help from a terrified mother, a geeky telemarketer who can locate anything must overcome the trauma his ability once caused him in order to save a kidnapped girl.
Man, you guys are challenging and good. Just what I needed. Edited!
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After an outbound insurance sales call ends in a supernatural plea for help from a terrified mother, a geeky telemarketer who can locate anything must overcome the trauma his ability once caused him in order to save a kidnapped girl.
Is that a bit better? Without making it too long?
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After an outbound insurance sales call ends in a supernatural plea for help from a terrified mother, a geeky telemarketer who can locate anything must overcome the trauma his ability once caused him in order to save a kidnapped girl.
Very good point, let me work on that. Thank you!
