ClaireYeowart

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on In 1955, a young Debutante is sole witness to murder and must enlist the help of another criminal, his niece, to help her get to safety. But the killer is on their trail and he’ll stop at nothing to silence them.

The niece of the killer, sorry I worded it all wrong.
on In 1955, a young Debutante is sole witness to murder and must enlist the help of another criminal, his niece, to help her get to safety. But the killer is on their trail and he’ll stop at nothing to silence them.

I realise I've worded it incorrectly. It's meant to read... In 1955, a young Debutante is sole witness to murder orchestrated by London's most ruthless crime boss. She must enlist the help of another criminal, his niece, to help her…
on A POW interned at a Japanese camp in World War II finds an unlikely alley in a heroic dog who helps him through hardship, before a daring escape attempt places man and dog in an even bigger fight for survival.

Thanks for your thoughts GregLucM!
on When a 70 year old KGB sleeper agent loses the will to kill, he decides to become his target’s guardian against assassination instead.

Agree with the others. Would love to see this. I think the logline is fantastic accept I'd like to know who the target is. Is it someone important?
on A group of strangers volunteering for a program where they have their skin color removed discover that beauty truly comes from within.

This is an intriguing concept but it's a little too vague. Is this set in the future? Who is the main protagonist? Is it comedy or sci-fi? I couldn't tell.