Glyn Carter

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on A haughty Elvin princess with no love for humans, must leave her beloved sheltering woods, to find her brother before their father passes.

Much less confusing! I'm curious whether the humans turn out to be barbaric (as in Avatar, where the humans are mostly baddies); or whether she finds "humanity", kindness, or even love. Has the brother gone native among the people? Lots…
on When they discover a plot by do-gooding aliens to destroy human sexuality (in the mistakenly belief that it causes war on Earth), Nerdy Sid and Zen must save the world’s libido.

You're right, the parenthesis isn't needed in the logline. The aliens don't see the effects of their plan because they are bad anthropologists caught in the headlights of humanity's own obsession with sex. When they take human form they adopt…
on When they discover a plot by do-gooding aliens to destroy human sexuality (in the mistakenly belief that it causes war on Earth), Nerdy Sid and Zen must save the world’s libido.

Thanks - makes me think I should up the fact that Sid is lovelorn, and Zen sex-starved
on When the king of the elves decides it’s time to BECOME, it’s up to a haughty Elvin princess to leave the Green Sea and enter the world of the Human “Barbarians” to find her brother, so he can take the throne.

Is the story about the King? No, it's about the haughty daughter. How are we going to warm to her if she's haughty? Or is it about the brother? What was the King before he BECAME, anyway?