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When an angry lonely drag queen moonlighting as a hit man, gets given one last job, he sets out to complete the hit, but the victim turns out to be his greatest fan and instead, together they hatch the perfect escape plan
Reservoir Pussycats Thelma and Louise in drag
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It’s February 1930, just months after Black Tuesday. In light of their financial woes, a small-town mortician and his arrogant wife start murdering the rich to keep their beloved funeral home afloat.
Ha! This is warped!.... How about they run a gas station/mortuary in some God-forsaken stretch of Okie Rte 66. The Fords get gas and go. The Deusenbergs pull in for gas, and don't pull out. The cemetery on the hill…
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A young reporter investigates a case involving a mysterious videotape which causes the death of anyone who watches it.
Reminds me of that movie where the kid got sucked into the TV. Not my kind of thing, but.... I might just watch this! It's hitting around 8 or 9 on my Creepy-Meter.
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When a delusional shut-in discovers that his favorite webcam model has been kidnapped, he must utilize his detective skills to locate her before she becomes another victim of a rampant madman.
He is totally absorbed by online games and his porn soul mate. His hidden skill (which he has to uncover and modify for the real world) is solving games/puzzles. He can "detect" by identifying patterns and solving puzzles that no…
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It’s February 1930, just months after Black Tuesday. In light of their financial woes, a small-town mortician and his arrogant wife start murdering the rich to keep their beloved funeral home afloat.
I have a problem with "the rich". If it is in a relatively small town, rural setting I picture a very desolate situation where the Depression has leveled everyone into the category of "not rich any more". I think your…
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I would like to note that I am collaborating with my brother, username God.Rains, on the same project; and we are very grateful to all who have given us feedback since he first posted our logline. We apologize for not replying to dpg’s latest comment sooner than now, but we have to do all of our collaborating by phone. To respond to your latest comment, dpg, we do want our story to be character-driven; so your comment was very valuable and appreciated! After much discussion, here is our latest draft: “Transported with a group of his peers to an otherworldly gallery of paintings that become portals to strange worlds, an unpopular teen must overcome his insecurities and lead this band of misfits back home before the sinister evil that brought them here entraps them forever.”
Please continue to give us your honest and valuable feedback!
"Sinister Evil" >>> personify, objectify: "The Painter"
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Lonely woman recognizes on a blind date one of her torturers from ten years ago. After the memories of her horror come back, she decides to take revenge and find the rest of them.
Yes! Especially the empowerment implicit in the concept of "best therapy"! Hell hath no fury like a woman gang raped. Feed on the rage! I would make it more transformational by making her meek and mousy, and morally ambiguous by…
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A recovering alcoholic, teetering on the brink of relapse, uncovers a shadowy 12-step labyrinth of blackmail, human trafficking and murder while he probes the brutal death of his sponsor.
Again, thanks for your encouraging critique! As a matter of fact, I had in mind that a sleazy sponsor would turn out to be "good", but now I see the twist you've torqued and it intrigues me! At the very…
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A recovering alcoholic, teetering on the brink of relapse, uncovers a shadowy 12-step labyrinth of blackmail, human trafficking and murder while he probes the brutal death of his sponsor.
Thanks for tightening it up. However, the precipitating event is the death of his sponsor, which event gets "buried" in your rewrite. Also, a great part of the risk is involved with his needing to revisit the very people and…
