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on Due to IVF and genetic changes humanity only exist in the future as twins or multiple births. A self-proclaimed leader decides that the natural balance has to be restored by what he calls natural selection. The tormented genius “Daggy” Pollux fights against the execution of his love interest who’s been selected as the weaker one.

Yes! That's the core of the story. Now a days Twins or multiple births are people wo have this ?special bond? But what happends when everybody is like this? It's the psychology of people feeling threatened by the ones who…
on Due to IVF and genetic changes humanity only exist in the future as twins or multiple births. A self-proclaimed leader decides that the natural balance has to be restored by what he calls natural selection. The tormented genius “Daggy” Pollux fights against the execution of his love interest who’s been selected as the weaker one.

Very usefull, working on a new logline!
on Due to IVF and genetic changes humanity only exist in the future as twins or multiple births. A self-proclaimed leader decides that the natural balance has to be restored by what he calls natural selection. The tormented genius “Daggy” Pollux fights against the execution of his love interest who’s been selected as the weaker one.

Thanks for your comments, very usefull! I wanted it to call ?survival of the fittest? but that would make people think of the hunger games. So I used the words ?Natural balance? But is makes you think the same. And…